My hometown is United States of America. I like it very much because of three things…
1. Disney world, because it is the biggest park of U.S.A, it has a lot things to play and a lot of attraction in witch you could get on, it has hotels inside the park were you can stay, if you are staying there the park will give you 3 more hours after closing.
2. The beach’s, because they are very beautiful, the ocean is about two colors: light blue and light green, the sand is like a yellow very light. In the ocean there are many sea creatures for example: sharks, clown fishes, turtles, jelly fishes, crabs, etc..
3. The people, because they are very welcoming, they are very nice, very helpful, etc. Most of the people in U.S.A have the hair blond, eyes blue or green, white or or a little darker than white, some persons are tall, etc.
1. Disney world, because it is the biggest park of U.S.A, it has a lot things to play and a lot of attraction in witch you could get on, it has hotels inside the park were you can stay, if you are staying there the park will give you 3 more hours after closing.
2. The beach’s, because they are very beautiful, the ocean is about two colors: light blue and light green, the sand is like a yellow very light. In the ocean there are many sea creatures for example: sharks, clown fishes, turtles, jelly fishes, crabs, etc..
3. The people, because they are very welcoming, they are very nice, very helpful, etc. Most of the people in U.S.A have the hair blond, eyes blue or green, white or or a little darker than white, some persons are tall, etc.
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